Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2002 11:19:18 -0400
From: Kit Mason <kit at hers.com>
To: WSFA members <WSFAlist at keithlynch.net>
Subject: [WSFA] Re: Could use some editing, was So Many Universes, SoLittle
 Time
Reply-To: WSFA members <WSFAlist at keithlynch.net>

Erica VD Ginter wrote:
>
> Oh, the urge to edit what one is reading! It's hard to keep disbelief
> suspended with a metaphorical red pencil in your hand!

Who said it was metaphorical?<g>

I would have been happy if he'd switched out of passive voice once in a
while, at least.

Kit