Date: Wed, 24 Jul 2002 16:04:40 -0400
From: Elspeth Kovar <ekovar at radix.net>
To: WSFA members <WSFAlist at keithlynch.net>
Subject: [WSFA] Re: Candy's new business
Reply-To: WSFA members <WSFAlist at keithlynch.net>

"Hand crafted, elegant, and one of a kind.  The colors of the iridescent
silk shift and flow as you move.  French seaming and other detailing
assures that you can wear these with pleasure for many years.

Celedon [what the heck is celedon?] pants are also pictured to display
fit.

Please check the fit of the ankle cuff; alterations available for the
high bidder."  [is this really an issue?]

I would suggest shooting the photo of the pants somewhat differently.  A
lighter neutral background would show them better, and pinning them to
something so that they're somewhat draped and there are no hands in the
photo.  You've done good work, and should display it at its best.

Elspeth