To: WSFAlist at keithlynch.net
From: erjablow at netacc.net
Subject: [WSFA] Re:  Writing Technical Matters
Date: Thu, 06 Feb 2003 12:37:54 EST
Reply-To: WSFA members <WSFAlist at keithlynch.net>

No one expects a science fiction author to be an expert
at the science he writes about.  Sometimes, it is a good
idea, but it should not be necessary.

However, an author should have a decent respect for the
subject he writes about.  Many authors who would never
refer to styles of Elizabethan dress or Roman quinquereme
construction without consulting experts, visiting museums
displaying them, or reading contemporary accounts, make
no effort to present the science they write about
realistically.  In some cases, they end up writing anti-science
fiction.

One of the first stories I read was an A. E. van Vogt story
that posited that each planet had its own characteristic
mathematics.  On Mars, they had no negative numbers.

Alan Dean Foster wrote a novel set on a planet where
everything was fractal-shaped, and if a human went there
without special glasses, he would go mad.  Nonsense.  If
you want to see something fractal-shaped, go look at a tree.
Of course, Foster could not know any better; he's a hack.

The late Robert Forward wrote a book where the aliens
were extremely smart, supposedly.  Forward presented
them all as being great mathematicians.  So, the human
protagoinist asked them about the Fermat conjecture.  This
is forgivable, as the book was written long before the
Wiles-Taylor proof.  But, Forward had the aliens say
something to the effect that the Fermat conjecture is the
wrong question; one should ask instead whether an nth power
can be the sum of fewer than n nth powers.

Unfortunately for the book's credibility, somebody in
the 1960s had discovered a sum of 4 fifth powers
equalling a fifth power.

Well, most people would not have caught that, but it
shows that the author didn't ask anyone with real knowledge.
This is fatal to any writing endeavor.  The cloning
author should not make the same mistake.

Respectfully,
Eric Jablow